merippedexposed (merippedexposed) wrote in thexposedyou,
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Here is one of my lastest poems I've been trying a new style and after a lil practicing It worked out.


A spinning top
Waining Debris
of soul, of heart, of tyranny

BLeeding Sanity
Reaping Dillusions
The Face of the card
bears confusion

Power consumes
the sweetest souls
Perspective shock
takes control

Circular Motion
Vortex of craft
Repeating Mistakes of the past

It slides off Me
slinking to the ground
Hurt and Pain
an Evil shroud

Under it lies
Raw Flesh Exposed
To be eaten away by men
My deepest foes.

so what do ya think?
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